Talk:Bloons:Neutronox Ultima(Scrolling Shooter game)/@comment-24170389-20141113210115

About your storyline... 1 - Add space after commas, dots (.), bars (/ and \), two dots , dot and comma , and before parenthesis , brackets [] or "cochetes" {} (LTGT). It's obvious that you must add spaces after each word. ._.

2 - At least, split in 2nd paragraph in 3 paragraphs.

3 - Only capitalize (Turn letters into their capitalized versions, like turn "a" into "A", and so on with other letters) after a dot (.), after a dot and comma, after a number on a number list (Like "1 -", "1." and so on with other numbers), when it's a proper name (Like "Catherine", "Davis", and so on with other existant proper names), or:


 * A bullet, like the one before this phrase.
 * Also, you can capitalize the whole word whenever you want to make enphasis or "bold".
 * By the way, I was too "Captain Obvious" just to you understand...sorry if I was too obvious. And I was "worried" with the grammar of the storyline, actually. I just went Captain Obvious because a certain user doesn't understand what I say.

Otherwise, it's a pretty excelent storyline.