User blog:Meta07/My first time trying to draw someone

Shiawata Yuu (幸た優）- Eternal Wars (late chapters)

 * Big Head Syndrome
 * Overly long neck
 * Derpy face
 * Failed eyes
 * Damaged paper
 * Improperly erased trace lines
 * Horribly drawn hands
 * Skirt seems kinda transparent
 * Weirdly shaded clothes
 * Improper anatomy
 * Does she even look like a hikikomori at all?!
 * Oh, and she is supposed to be sitting diagonally while typing on some sort of keyboard, but I haven't drawn the accessories yet so...
 * So yeah, so many fails (I just suck at drawing...)
 * Btw, if it wasn't obvious enough, the cloud effect was done in Photoshop because when I took the pic it was too dark and shadowy. Adjusted the contrast too.