Talk:Rebecca Parham/@comment-5357744-20181224200016

I'd appreciate a bit more detail in this conception. I know that NK makes descriptions like these for their heroes but detail is always important, especially when it comes to something that doesn't actually exist.

Here are all the details that I believe should be included:


 * How much range is medium range? Can you give it in terms of another tower's range, or maybe provide an image?
 * What is "slightly higher attack range"? Could you give a percentage increase, or in terms of another tower's range? This applies to all the other range upgrades as well.
 * When you say "up to two layers of bloons" it sounds like the pencil will pop two layers of bloons before disappearing. I would change it to something like "pops two layers per bloon hit" or even "deals two damage". Find a way to make the wording clearer.
 * What do pens do? Are they thrown at the same speed as pencils? Does it just become a double shot? Or are they thrown faster/slower, do they pierce more or do more damage, etc.
 * How does "Child Exterminator" choose its targets?
 * What is the explosion radius on the exploding pencils/pens? Do they explode differently? How much damage do the explosions do?
 * The level 16 ability is unclear in general. I'm sure you know what you should add to it.