Talk:Time Leaper (Re-Invented)/@comment-4814638-20140710050830

The first article I have rated in a long time. :P Well, here goes.

Originality: Now, where have I seen this concept before? However, this article has a lot more originality in the upgrades, though. Especially M⌚E⌚M⌚O⌚R⌚I⌚A. Score: 7 of 10

Details: Everything important is here, except how often the Count.D.o.w.n. effect occurs. Score: 9 of 10

Balance: Improved Magic is a bit OP. If it were 5 rounds forward rather than 7 rounds, it'd improve the score. Everything else is perfectly fine, though. :3 Score: 9 of 10

Epickness: Being able to not only bring things forwards in time, but BACKWARDS, too? AND THE AUTHOR EVEN STATES THAT IT IS NORMALLY IMPOSSIBLE TO DO IN REALITY?!? ' AND BEING ABLE TO MAKE MEMORIES MANIFEST IN REALITY?!? ' This certainly brings up the HSQ. Score: 10 of 10

Final Score: 35 of 40
Barely an approval, but this deserves the seal anyway, because of the sheer HSQ and this run on sentence lolololol.